forced - trying to make something funny or natural when it isnt
- trying too hard to the point where it detracts from the work

you have way too many low quality jokes crammed in there and you didnt develop any of them. try reading articles from the onion; not my cup of tea either but that seems like your style.

<as far as stenglese goes, idk why you hate him. many comedians are great friends. look at colbert and daily. maybe you two could go tit for tat with eachother with one liners. that way both of your comedic value improves

Yes, and I don't care what Stengelese's Army has to say about it. I'm hilarious and people will accept that soon enough. They're just bitter because I dislike their master.

Ok, lets hope it improves tomorrow. I await with great anticipation.......or with abbreviations in CAPS.

" I'm hilarious "

And modest too by all accounts. Haha.

i kinda like it. not the initial jokes but the comments by "stenglese army" and radios reaction. does that make me a bad person?

Well yesterday everyone made it very clear for me to keep it short, so I don't know how I'm supposed to develop the jokes when I'm not allowed to. Telling "one liners" doesn't develop anything btw. Low quality? Is that so? You must've been raised by a cactus.

" I'm hilarious and people will accept that soon enough."

That made me laugh.

Not really speechless, just didn't want to cane the geezer in front of all his mates. lol

He's the most modest person he knows.. He's the best at being modest.

I'm sorry. Cant wait for tomorrow!

I have to give him credit for that line, it was funny, intentionally or not. lol

"Well yesterday everyone made it very clear for me to keep it short"

is that all people told you? because thats the only thing that changed

"You must've been raised by a cactus."

thats a good line. maybe you should insult people because your insults are pretty funny and original. im being completely serious too

be honest, have you ever told a joke to somebody where they actually laughed?

Well good! I'm glad. If you prefer to laugh at me, at least I'll get the satisfcation of knowing you think I'm at least mildly amusing.

I know. I feel bad. I think we all should give him another chance. He can't get any worse :)

I dig.

"be honest, have you ever told a joke to somebody where they actually laughed?"

Yes, tons of time. I'm being completely honest. You simply have no sense of humor because I've been told by MANY people that I'm funny. I don't care if you believe me or not.

"Well good! I'm glad. If you prefer to laugh at me, at least I'll get the satisfcation of knowing you think I'm at least mildly amusing."

I truly admire your effort and I do give you credit for at least creating threads in which funny things were said.

Here, try this: www.funnylines-toimpresspeopleonmessageboards.com

HTH. TAR