forced - trying to make something funny or natural when it isnt - trying too hard to the point where it detracts from the work
you have way too many low quality jokes crammed in there and you didnt develop any of them. try reading articles from the onion; not my cup of tea either but that seems like your style.
<as far as stenglese goes, idk why you hate him. many comedians are great friends. look at colbert and daily. maybe you two could go tit for tat with eachother with one liners. that way both of your comedic value improves
" I'm hilarious "
And modest too by all accounts. Haha.
" I'm hilarious and people will accept that soon enough."
That made me laugh.
"Well yesterday everyone made it very clear for me to keep it short"
is that all people told you? because thats the only thing that changed
"You must've been raised by a cactus."
thats a good line. maybe you should insult people because your insults are pretty funny and original. im being completely serious too
be honest, have you ever told a joke to somebody where they actually laughed?
"be honest, have you ever told a joke to somebody where they actually laughed?"
Yes, tons of time. I'm being completely honest. You simply have no sense of humor because I've been told by MANY people that I'm funny. I don't care if you believe me or not.
"Well good! I'm glad. If you prefer to laugh at me, at least I'll get the satisfcation of knowing you think I'm at least mildly amusing."
I truly admire your effort and I do give you credit for at least creating threads in which funny things were said.
Here, try this: www.funnylines-toimpresspeopleonmessageboards.com