forced - trying to make something funny or natural when it isnt - trying too hard to the point where it detracts from the work
you have way too many low quality jokes crammed in there and you didnt develop any of them. try reading articles from the onion; not my cup of tea either but that seems like your style.
<as far as stenglese goes, idk why you hate him. many comedians are great friends. look at colbert and daily. maybe you two could go tit for tat with eachother with one liners. that way both of your comedic value improves
" I'm hilarious "
And modest too by all accounts. Haha.
" I'm hilarious and people will accept that soon enough."
That made me laugh.